Poetry

HamelinHamelin
edited October 2007 in Jeff's Typewriter Emporium
New Post: http://www.jkirchoff.net/?p=211

I think I used all the words mostly correctly. Thoughts?

Comments

  • X'o'LoreX'o'Lore
    edited October 2007
    That'll teach you to leave your Vorpal sword at home.
  • hlavcohlavco
    edited October 2007
    Your font distracts me... the space after every o and e is longer than that for other letters. I don't know why, but it's making it hard for me to concentrate for some reason.
  • HamelinHamelin
    edited October 2007
    I don't see it, maybe your browser is rendering my page incorrectly.
  • Melted JhonnycakeMelted Jhonnycake
    edited October 2007
    The last two stanzas make me think of zombies.

    Is that supposed to be zombie imagery?

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