Comic #48: In Which Characters Are Developed... I Think. (10/29/2007)

hlavco

At the beginning of the month, I set a goal to be at comic #50 by Halloween. Even though it's the 29th and I'm only at #48, I intend to keep that goal. Expect to see a crappy three- or four-panel comic tomorrow.

I thought it was kinda funny how stuffed animals are still fairly successful even though most of the denizens of their world are cuter than the stuffed animals themselves. Then again, people in our world bought those TERRIFYING dolls from the forties and earlier... seriously, those things are creepy.

bruce

Nifty comic! Oh yes.

hlavco

Some doodles! I've been drawing a lot of Charmeleons lately.

Ignore the crappy Eevee. I only colored it because it was on the same page, and it looked better beforehand.

I like this one, because even though I drew them completely unrelated, it looks like Santa is blasting Charmeleon off the roof with his finger. Also, I like those jack'o'lanterns. Somebody should make a webcomic about jack'o'lanterns.

X'o'Lore

You must be THIS tall to ride the ride.

Amoeba Boy

A Hlavco's Unnamed Pokemon Webcomic/Aminal Crossing cross over would be awesome.

Drooling Iguana

The second panel of the comic is a bit odd. The way the ball is positioned it looks like the counter is the "speed line" behind it, which would mean it's heading directly for the blue guy's head. It took me a second to notice the actual speed line to the left.

hlavco

Yeah, I guess you're right. What would you suggest?

Drooling Iguana

I'm not sure. Maybe change the angle a bit or re-draw the ball either slightly earlier or slightly later in its arc so that it's not in line with the counter. Changing the colour of the countertop would also probably help, although then you'd have to change it in the previous comic as well.

hlavco

Amoeba Boy wrote: »

A Hlavco's Unnamed Pokemon Webcomic/Aminal Crossing cross over would be awesome.

While not a cross-over, for awhile I was thinking about doing an Animal Crossing-related series of comics. Here's something I made early last summer, just to see if I could pull off AC characters. The cat is obviously Bob, and the squirrel is just made up. I guess I was in a pink mood that night.

Ah, the simple joys of the elephant slide... it stinks you can't actually use them.

Agentcel

I just noticed that the counter in 1-3 looks flat. It needs another line.

EDIT: never mind, he's standing on the counter. Those panels are so damn confusing the more you look at them!

hlavco

Don't strain your brain too much, Agentcel. It's just Pokemon.