Let's Play my NaNoWriMo project!

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  • edited November 2007
    >Go back to sleep.
  • edited November 2007
    Man, this is just too strange, you decide to just take a nap, perhaps this whole thing is just a dream and you're really at home in bed.

    You drift into a deep sleep. After a long while you...

    Options...

    > Wake up.

    > Toss and turn.

    > Snore.
  • edited November 2007
    Snore like you've never snored before!
  • edited November 2007
    Again? Alright.

    You snore loudly and it wakes you up with a start.

    The noise seems to have attracted a large elk. He has gigantic, majestic antlers.

    Options...

    > Talk to the elk.

    > Attack the elk.

    > Run from the elk.
  • edited November 2007
    Talk to the elk. It may be friendly.
  • edited November 2007
    This is a weird page, also, something seems to be broken with the IP thing:

    You address the elk.

    It stares vacantly at you.

    "It is currently Friday, November 23, 2007 10:07:11 AM."

    The heck?

    "Your IP address is 127.0.0.1 ."

    Huh?

    "Your resolution is 1280 x 1024 pixels."

    Resolwhatnow? What the heck is up with this creature?

    Suddenly its eyes glow red and it fires two red beams of light at you! You burst into flames almost instantly.

    You have died!

    Your final score is:
    000404 Points.

    > Start again?


    Geez guys, stop dying so early.


    You wake up atop a grassy knoll underneath a bright blue sky. Birds chirp in the distance as the sun shines warmly onto your face.

    From somewhere nearby the smell of smoke wafts into your nostrils. You sit up and look around, but you can't see the source of the smoke.

    Actually, now that you think about it, you don't really know where you are or how you got here. After a quick check you notice all you have on you is your trusty sword and the clothes on your back. How strange.

    You decide to...

    > Go back to sleep.

    > Follow the smell of smoke.

    > Head <W>est.
  • edited November 2007
    Follow the smell of smoke.
  • edited November 2007
    ou adjust your sword and head down the hill towards the billowing smoke in the distance. At length you come across a well-worn country road that heads in the direction you're heading and you opt to follow it.

    Eventually you come across a crossroads where you find a deeply tanned man wearing a grey cloak and a broad straw hat leaning against a signpost. He looks at you and spits a balck wad of chewing tobacco on the ground. Maybe he's a farmer.

    "Don't want to go that way kid." He gestures in the direction of the smoke, "Nothing good over there."

    You ask him what he means but he just shrugs his shoulders and puts another bit of chaw in his mouth.

    The two signs on the signpost the man is leaning against is worn and unreadable, but one arrow points forward towards the smoke and the other points down the path to the right.

    Options...

    > Forget this guy, his hat is silly. Continue down the road toward the smoke.

    > Take a right, see where that leads you.

    > Converse with the man further.
  • edited November 2007
    Hamelin wrote: »
    At length you come across a well-worn country road that heads in the direction you're heading and you opt to follow it.

    "Heads in the direction you're heading"... the phrasing seems awkward here.
  • edited November 2007
    Forget this guy, his hat is silly. Continue down the road toward the smoke.
  • edited November 2007
    You guys are going to die again. =)


    The smoke in the distance troubles you and you continue towards it. Before too long you come across a scene that horrifies you.

    A small country hamlet is smouldering. Several cottages have been burned clear to the ground and others are charred to the point of collapse.

    There are several badly burned corpses spread around the village, some of them look distinctly non-human.

    What on earth happened here?

    Options...

    > Investigate the ruined hamlet.

    > Get the hell out of here before whoever did this finds you.

    > No one's looking, loot!
  • edited November 2007
    Get the hell out of here before whoever did this finds you.
  • edited November 2007
    It's a trap!


    Horrified, you turn to flee this ghastly place an are stopped dead in your tracks by a group of armed goblins wielding crude weapons and torches.

    One hisses at his mates, "Aye boys, seems we missed one here!"

    They charge at you and you draw your sword. You fight desperately and even cut a few of them down, but eventually you are overcome by their sheer numbers.

    They douse you in oil and light you ablaze while you're bleeding on the ground from the many wounds you sustained at their hands. The pain is excruciating.

    You have died!

    Your final score is:
    000031 Points.

    > Start again?


    Told you.


    You wake up atop a grassy knoll underneath a bright blue sky. Birds chirp in the distance as the sun shines warmly onto your face.

    From somewhere nearby the smell of smoke wafts into your nostrils. You sit up and look around, but you can't see the source of the smoke.

    Actually, now that you think about it, you don't really know where you are or how you got here. After a quick check you notice all you have on you is your trusty sword and the clothes on your back. How strange.

    You decide to...

    > Go back to sleep.

    > Follow the smell of smoke.

    > Head <W>est.
  • edited November 2007
    Follow the smell of smoke!!
  • edited November 2007
    Next time I recommend going back to sleep, and don't snore. Tossing and turning was interesting last I tried it.
  • edited November 2007
    You adjust your sword and head down the hill towards the billowing smoke in the distance. At length you come across a well-worn country road that heads in the direction you're heading and you opt to follow it.

    Eventually you come across a crossroads where you find a deeply tanned man wearing a grey cloak and a broad straw hat leaning against a signpost. He looks at you and spits a balck wad of chewing tobacco on the ground. Maybe he's a farmer.

    "Don't want to go that way kid." He gestures in the direction of the smoke, "Nothing good over there."

    You ask him what he means but he just shrugs his shoulders and puts another bit of chaw in his mouth.

    The two signs on the signpost the man is leaning against is worn and unreadable, but one arrow points forward towards the smoke and the other points down the path to the right.

    Options...

    > Forget this guy, his hat is silly. Continue down the road toward the smoke.

    > Take a right, see where that leads you.

    > Converse with the man further.
  • godgod
    edited November 2007
    Converse with the man further.
    Edit: No, you suck.
  • edited November 2007
    > Forget this guy, his hat is silly. Continue down the road toward the smoke.
    EDIT: You suck.
  • edited November 2007
    Pressing the man further on his rather cryptic remark yields nothing, but perhaps he has information to share about some other topic.

    Options...

    > Ask him about the weather.

    > See if he has any interesting news.

    > Inquire what's up with his hat.
  • edited November 2007
    Hamelin wrote: »

    Eventually you come across a crossroads where you find a deeply tanned man wearing a grey cloak and a broad straw hat leaning against a signpost. He looks at you and spits a balck wad of chewing tobacco on the ground. Maybe he's a farmer.

    You misspelled 'black' as 'balck'.

    Oh, and see if he has any interesting news.
  • edited November 2007
    I saw that and fixed it. I really need a plugin for dreamweaver that can spellcheck an entire site. There's no way I'm going to go through 250 pages one by one and spellcheck them all.

    Anyway


    "News? Huh. You been trapped in a cave for the last few weeks?"

    He sees the blank look on your face and sighs, "Kid, country's at war with the stinkin' gobs. Get your head out of your ass and pay attention to what's going on around you."

    Options...

    > "Gobs?"

    > "You didn't have to be so rude mister jerkypants."

    > Ask him about something else.
  • godgod
    edited November 2007
    Ask him about something else. Specifically, his hat.
  • edited November 2007
    That option's a loopback. It's possible to get into infinite loops if you just click randomly.


    Pressing the man further on his rather cryptic remark yields nothing, but perhaps he has information to share about some other topic.

    Options...

    > Ask him about the weather.

    > See if he has any interesting news.

    > Inquire what's up with his hat.
  • edited November 2007
    Well, since no one else is taking it, I suggest not talking about his hat.. he'll probably get pissed and kill us.

    So.. see if he has any interesting news.
  • edited November 2007
    That's just going back into the loop!


    "News? Huh. You been trapped in a cave for the last few weeks?"

    He sees the blank look on your face and sighs, "Kid, country's at war with the stinkin' gobs. Get your head out of your ass and pay attention to what's going on around you."

    Options...

    > "Gobs?"

    > "You didn't have to be so rude mister jerkypants."

    > Ask him about something else.
  • edited November 2007
    "Gobs?"

    There was a reason for that.
  • edited November 2007
    The man sneers at you.

    "Stinkin' gobs! You know, goblins! Those little green buggers. Word is some master swordsman moved in and took over the whole stinkin' race and is using 'em to siege the kingdom."

    Options...

    > "The goblins are being led by a human? Why would the they let someone use them like that?

    > "That sounds a little far-fetched."

    > Ask him about something else.
  • edited November 2007
    "The goblins are being led by a human? Why would the they let someone use them like that?

    ...There should be another " at the end of that.
  • edited November 2007
    > "The goblins are being led by a human? Why would the they let someone use them like that?
  • edited November 2007
    Damn typos!


    "That's the rumor, but who knows. I know if I was that swordsman I'd of cut down every single one of those little green bastards instead of driving them to war."

    He looks up at the sky, "I've got things to do kid, watch yourself, keep asking so many questions and it'll probably be trouble."

    Before you can say anything else the man heads off the road and into the trees.

    Options...

    > Head towards the smoke.

    > Take a right, see where that leads you.

    > Trail the man.