My latest story!

brucebruce
edited November 2007 in Comics
Well here it is. My newest story in a while. The writing of this has been really eventful. It's gone through a few total rewrites due to my dislike of the first version and accidentally deleting the original version a while back.

Most of the story was written late at night so a few small portions of the grammar may be a bit dodgy. Should you notice anything tell me and I'll fix it.

Nota Bene: This story is about 5 and a half A4 pages in length.


So without further ado, I present to you my latest story!

Comments

  • AgentcelAgentcel
    edited November 2007
    Awesome job!
    I'm glad to have been no help in restoring it's deletion! Um, that's contributing, right?
  • X'o'LoreX'o'Lore
    edited November 2007
    Heh. Not too bad.
  • brucebruce
    edited November 2007
    It seems that people like it. This pleases me. I'd like to write more featuring Mike and John (hence the clues in the story) and I am going to put it to a referendum!

    Would you like to see more stories featuring Mike and John?
  • AgentcelAgentcel
    edited November 2007
    Yes.
  • X'o'LoreX'o'Lore
    edited November 2007
    I Dunno. As writing goes it's not bad. My personal interests in literature tend to steer me to other sorts of stories, though. I'd say if you like writing about Mike and John, go for it. I'm sure there are others who'd appreciate it, and I might be inclined to read such stories anyway.

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