I really just skimmed over it, but I couldn't figure out what was going on, but neither could the characters at that part so that might have been the point.
Darker lines are readable text are your friend (This issue really only applies to like the first 3 and was fixed very early in).
The drawing/style pretty decent. I like it anyway.
I can't really comment on the story as I didn't really read it all.
It looks like you're still experimenting with styles and characters. But I commend you for developing a story and drawing it out, this seems to have taken much planning and effort. You seem to copy the styles of the many manga you likely read, including the "this was originally in JApanese!!" -ness of using name suffixes. It makes you look like a bit of a poseur.
Keep at it. Seems you're still getting the hang of motion and pose, backgrounds.
Okay, so like, it's cool that you're really starting to develop a style as you progress through the comic. Cause at first it was sort of like bland and typical anime, but then you started to play around and it feels like you're totally starting to become more original. You're a star.
I really like the nipponese suffixes, they're like pretty cool. Yup, totally cool, I'm like 10000% percent positive (not a typo!).
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Darker lines are readable text are your friend (This issue really only applies to like the first 3 and was fixed very early in).
The drawing/style pretty decent. I like it anyway.
I can't really comment on the story as I didn't really read it all.
Keep at it. Seems you're still getting the hang of motion and pose, backgrounds.
I really like the nipponese suffixes, they're like pretty cool. Yup, totally cool, I'm like 10000% percent positive (not a typo!).
Seems this Johnny person isn't around anymore either. And I notice a distinct dwindling in the frequency of Davey's posts.
The Orange Belt is awesome at new people.
Although any time I see something that isn't in general I tend to automatically log into the admin panel and get ready to delete some spam.