And yeah, the fourth panel bubbles confused me a bit.
EDIT: Not to keep heapin' on criticism, because I did like the comic, but the beginning kinda confuses me too:
-Is this the part where you blah blah blah..?
-Yes.
-Well I'm not gonna do that.
What is the Miscreant not gonna do? I thought Sheik was supposed to do something?
Stop being a jerk about the comic, honestly. Mario has things to do, and not like he owes us comics or anything. When it starts to feel like an obligation and you have to deal with people who demand updates and demand to be entertained then all the fun gets sucked out of it.
EDIT: Not to keep heapin' on criticism, because I did like the comic, but the beginning kinda confuses me too:
-Is this the part where you blah blah blah..?
-Yes.
-Well I'm not gonna do that.
What is the Miscreant not gonna do? I thought Sheik was supposed to do something?
That confuses me a bit, too. I think the Miscreant is not gonna back down from his plans, as it's about the time where Shiek makes the hero's obligatory "stop your evil plans" speech.
If it was poorly worded, I really don't care at this point. It's been difficult enough to find time to make this comic, and I have no intention to remake it. The dialogoue probably made more sense before I edited it down to four panels, but I'm sure you understand the gist of the exchange.
So, Zelda Comic is like your drug? See, you try to kick the habit, but it comes back to bite you in the ass. So the moral is, never try to give stuff up.
Eh, don't worry, some people just aren't good spellers, I personally don't judge someone too harshly for their spelling. Now if your grammar is bad, that'll piss me off. I'm quite anal about grammar.
It should be verily agreed -- this isn't going anywhere.
I mean, really. Sheik and the Miscreant are having a fascinating conversation, I assure you, but even after the mention of the required battle they continue to chatter? Where's the blood, you two?
Leastways Bub was aware of the brief pause in updates.
If it was poorly worded, I really don't care at this point. It's been difficult enough to find time to make this comic, and I have no intention to remake it. The dialogoue probably made more sense before I edited it down to four panels, but I'm sure you understand the gist of the exchange.
Yeah, I think the general idea is there. I wouldn't worry about it.
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That's some matter-of-fact trash talking right there.
*holds up sign that says "Go Miscreant!"*
I loved Navi's first line; it made me giggle and all that jazz.
And yeah, the fourth panel bubbles confused me a bit.
EDIT: Not to keep heapin' on criticism, because I did like the comic, but the beginning kinda confuses me too:
-Is this the part where you blah blah blah..?
-Yes.
-Well I'm not gonna do that.
What is the Miscreant not gonna do? I thought Sheik was supposed to do something?
EDIT: I'm getting tired just thinking about Navi fluttering her wings like that for 2 months.
He just re-drew it in response to Bub's comment. Notice where he's pointing it?
OH EMM GEE! Pit is the Miscreant! THIS PROVES IT!
I believe the fancy archer term is "nocked." But drawn works just as well, if not moreso.
That confuses me a bit, too. I think the Miscreant is not gonna back down from his plans, as it's about the time where Shiek makes the hero's obligatory "stop your evil plans" speech.
(please don't make fun of my bad spelling)
I mean, really. Sheik and the Miscreant are having a fascinating conversation, I assure you, but even after the mention of the required battle they continue to chatter? Where's the blood, you two?
Leastways Bub was aware of the brief pause in updates.
Yeah, I think the general idea is there. I wouldn't worry about it.
well sens he has had one "drawn" sens the first showed up i think his used to it;)