'Shroom Comic

ToadstoolToadstool
edited December 2006 in Comics
Yep, I started up my own comic. Not sure how long this whim will last, but I guess we'll see.
http://www.shroomcomic.blogspot.com/

That's the link, just up there... ^^
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I know this one isn't funny. That's because it's the first comic, and it needs to lead onto something or other.
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  • godgod
    edited August 2006
    You could have used the last thread.
  • hlavcohlavco
    edited August 2006
    I think the "My First Sprite Comic" thread.
  • BehemothBehemoth
    edited August 2006
    Sorry about that hlavco. I realized the error of my ways and deleted it immediately.
  • ToadstoolToadstool
    edited August 2006
    I was trying to delete that thread, as this is a thread purely devoted to my new comic. The old one was a comic with different sprites and no story. I attempted to delete it. I couldn't.
  • AgentcelAgentcel
    edited August 2006
    Hm...I want to say that only moderators can do that...I dunno.
  • ToadstoolToadstool
    edited August 2006
    That figures, then. I just realised that the first comic isn't coming up in the post, for me anyway. Is anyone else having this problem?
  • hlavcohlavco
    edited August 2006
    Nope, it's there.
  • AgentcelAgentcel
    edited August 2006
    Yeah, I'm still experimenting on how to get drawings in the post. (although if I put any effort in to finding out how...)
  • ToadstoolToadstool
    edited August 2006
    Agentcel - There's a little button with a square picture of a mountain and a sun or something. Click it. :)

    EDIT: Update with comic.
    http://photos1.blogger.com/blogger/6685/3145/1600/comic%201-2.png

    Excuse the crap quality of the first two panels, I was saving them in JPG before remembering that I use PNG X[
  • godgod
    edited August 2006
    Link didn't work for me.
  • hlavcohlavco
    edited August 2006
    It's hard to figure out who's saying what.

    But it's also hard to say no to cake.
  • ToadstoolToadstool
    edited August 2006
    I know, I'm having a bit of trouble with the text bubbles at the moment.

    By the way, is the font alright or would it be easier to read a clear font like Verdana?
  • AgentcelAgentcel
    edited August 2006
    eh, wish I could help ya out Toadstool, but the link dosn't work for me.:mad:
  • ToadstoolToadstool
    edited August 2006
    www.shroomcomic.blogspot.com

    Blogger's links have been a bit screwed up recently. If it doesn't work, go to www.blogger.com and search 'Shroom comic or something. :)
  • AgentcelAgentcel
    edited August 2006
    Good job, Toadstool! I can finally read #2 now. hm...*looks at it* I see you took my spriter's resource advice, eh? And for the word bubbles- there are pretty much two options. Option #1. Use different fonts for different charactors or Option#2. Make the text different colors. That's my way of seeing. (and also, why are we both up so late?!)
  • ToadstoolToadstool
    edited August 2006
    It's not late here XD It's only 5:20. PM.

    I made number 3, but Blogger's being screwy and not letting me post the image. If you check back soon it should be up.
  • ToadstoolToadstool
    edited August 2006
    Update!
    Please comment at 'Shroom

    comic13ay3.png
  • brucebruce
    edited August 2006
    ...So....why is like, mario getting zapped when he isn't touching nor near Electrode?
  • BehemothBehemoth
    edited August 2006
    He actually seems to be close enough. Assume it's one of those multiple target counter-attacks.
  • ToadstoolToadstool
    edited August 2006
    Yep! :D It's a very powerful Electrode. -nods-
  • mjc0961mjc0961
    edited August 2006
    And why is Electrode even in this comic?
  • AgentcelAgentcel
    edited August 2006
    hey, randomness isn't a bad thing! heh heh.
  • ToadstoolToadstool
    edited August 2006
    Exactly.

    PLUUUUUS, Mr. Mjc-fun-ruiner (:D), it leads on to the next comic.

    -pokes tongue out-
  • AgentcelAgentcel
    edited September 2006
    hm...comic number four...pretty good, but er-one thing. I'm not sure if the May sprites looks like it belongs in this comic, ya know? Kind of like a 16 bit -32 bit mix up. Not to be harsh, but that was something I had to point out. Other than that, good comic!
  • ToadstoolToadstool
    edited September 2006
    Yeah... unfortunately, I can't find any pokémon female 32-bit sprites. Help? :)
  • mjc0961mjc0961
    edited September 2006
    1. Start linking every new comic. We're not going to read them if we have to go hunt them down from links in old posts.
    2. It seems like you're missing some dialogue in comic 4. Why does May suddenly start asking about a cake and the castle?


    And those are 32-bit sprites. However, the styles from Mario and Luigi and Pokémon Ruby/Sapphire are too conflicting to look right together.
  • ToadstoolToadstool
    edited September 2006
    Psh, whatever d00d. >< I like my comic.

    Jokes, btw. Thanks for the criticism. I only realised the missing dialogue in panel 3/4 after I posted it. *facepalm* I couldn't be bothered fixin'. But why did you call her May?
  • AgentcelAgentcel
    edited September 2006
    But why did you call her May?
    -*falls down on the floor in utter disbeleif and climbs back up*
    Cause that's her name! (In the pokemon anime)
    Anyway, keep up the good work!

    EDIT: And also, here's a sprite to toy around with.

    mayar1.png
  • mjc0961mjc0961
    edited September 2006
    Toadstool wrote:
    But why did you call her May?

    Because you used May's sprites from Pokémon Ruby/Sapphire.
  • ToadstoolToadstool
    edited September 2006
    Agentcel wrote:
    Cause that's her name! (In the pokemon anime)
    Figures that I didn't understand... haven't watched in ages.

    I thought you just called her anything XD

    I haven't updated in a while. Sorry.

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