A comic. I made.

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  • Doom ShroomDoom Shroom
    edited April 2006
    Haha, hlavco's influence is slowly spreading through the forum's avatars...
  • godgod
    edited April 2006
    almost makes me glad i cant figure out how to use them
  • hlavcohlavco
    edited April 2006
    The poor Charmander doesn't get any love.

    Then again, he's only had one word of spoken dialogue...
  • hlavcohlavco
    edited April 2006
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    Thirteen days! That's my biggest comic-gap yet! Hooray for Sping Break Nothingdoingness!
  • Doom ShroomDoom Shroom
    edited April 2006
    The combination of panels 3 and 4 rock, and I love Pichu's expression on Panel 6. And good riddance to those drops; they're dangerous and pesky.

    This one might be my favorite one so far; good job.
  • godgod
    edited April 2006
    i wish i looked like pichu when i concentrated.
  • Doom ShroomDoom Shroom
    edited April 2006
    WOAH YOUR AVATAR IS TOTALLY POKING THE THREAD. THE RELEVANCE BOTH FRIGHTENS AND BEWILDERS ME.

    I kinda liked the expression more without that one red dot colored in, because it looked like his mouth rather than... the red dot... thing. Yes.
  • BehemothBehemoth
    edited April 2006
    That one was hilarious! I concur, Pichu's expression in panel six is awsome, actually, I enjoy all of the expressions you give your characters. You have a real nak(sp*) for portraying emotions.
  • ApathyApathy
    edited April 2006
    Knack.

    But I agree, I really liked that one.

    Teardrop mites are a plague upon comics that need to be stopped. With electroshock treatment.
  • hlavcohlavco
    edited April 2006
    Doom Shroom wrote:
    I kinda liked the expression more without that one red dot colored in, because it looked like his mouth rather than... the red dot... thing. Yes.

    The yellowness of the dots was to show that he's using electricity at the moment.
  • Doom ShroomDoom Shroom
    edited April 2006
    hlavco wrote:
    The yellowness of the dots was to show that he's using electricity at the moment.

    Blah blah blah, logic. Who said you were allowed to make sense!?
  • kirbykirby
    edited April 2006
    that was really funny
  • godgod
    edited April 2006
    you should definitly put charmander in the next one. he kicks ass
  • Doom ShroomDoom Shroom
    edited April 2006
    I concur.
  • hlavcohlavco
    edited April 2006
    Riding home today, I saw the worst thing ever: A Daewoo ridin' spinnaz.

    Geez.
  • Doom ShroomDoom Shroom
    edited April 2006
    Eww.
  • hlavcohlavco
    edited May 2006
    Ch-ch-check it out. Another comic.

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    This one was a nightmare to make. I had to create new views for just about everybody, and redraw Eevee from scratch for panel 2. On the plus side, the speech was much easier by comparison. It isn't too blatantly obvious that Squirtle and Charmander have the same legs in the first panel, is it?
  • Drooling IguanaDrooling Iguana
    edited May 2006
    Just to make sure I have things straight, "spinnaz" refers to those hubcaps that spin in the opposite direction to the wheel to make it look like it's not spinning at all, right? They suck.
  • hlavcohlavco
    edited May 2006
    Well, I suppose they sometimes do that. But it's really that they keep spinning after you stop so it looks like you're still moving.

    EDIT: I can't believe Wikipedia actually linked me to that article when I typed in "spinnaz".
  • deku12345deku12345
    edited May 2006
    I saw a car with "spinnaz" not only on the hubcaps, but on the steering wheel too! Made me chuckle to myself.
  • godgod
    edited May 2006
    hlavco, if you hadnt said anything about them having the same legs, no one would have noticed
  • Doom ShroomDoom Shroom
    edited May 2006
    hlavco wrote:
    Well, I suppose they sometimes do that. But it's really that they keep spinning after you stop so it looks like you're still moving.

    EDIT: I can't believe Wikipedia actually linked me to that article when I typed in "spinnaz".

    That's because Wikipedia is "down" with "hip" people.
  • RonRon
    edited May 2006
    Fo' shizzle
  • CytrollCytroll
    edited May 2006
    Ah now I get it add a "z" or two into a word and it's cool, fair enough.

    What happens if you stick an "x" into the mix aswell?
  • HamelinHamelin
    edited May 2006
    awexome?
  • Drooling IguanaDrooling Iguana
    edited May 2006
    Zawexome! That shall be our new superlative!
  • hlavcohlavco
    edited May 2006
    So I had this really great, wonderful idea for a new comic. Then it turned out that said idea would be really hard to make. So instead, you get this crap.

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    The Wartortle looks all rushed and aweful.
  • Drooling IguanaDrooling Iguana
    edited May 2006
    BUY SOMETHIN' WILL YA
    BOY, THIS IS REALLY EXPENSIVE!
  • hlavcohlavco
    edited May 2006
    Somebody on a different forum wrote:
    Those were boring. I don't see how anyone could like 'em. There wasn't any set up for the punch lines, which were pretty bad, too.

    My first negative review! I must've made the big time now! Let's all celebrate!
  • godgod
    edited May 2006
    woo! somebody on a different forum thinks you suck! now just read my avatar.

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