pokemon wolley dicussion

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  • edited November 2006
    It won't die if he...oh. That would suck for him. But technically, you can revive any thread ever made on the Orange Belt! I could even revive the first ever thread...fwuhuhuhu....(<-- pokemon sound/game/phrase?)
  • edited November 2006
    And I've been rearin' to yell at someone for something for some time now!
  • edited November 2006
    Yeah, you got me that day where I completely spaced out and bumped a couple ancient support topics. :p
  • edited November 2006
    To be....or not to be [a thread reviving asshole]. That is the question.
  • edited November 2006
    "Not to be" is the answer.
  • edited November 2006
    Thanks for the lifeline. :p
  • edited December 2006
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  • edited December 2006
    Aside from the main problem, which we have covered already, a few things:

    Why does his hat change colour?
    You need something to indicate progression of time between panel 1 and 2, e.g. an extra panel showing him walking to the lab, or a box saying "Some time later" in the top of the panel.

    Speech bubbles are getting better though.
  • edited December 2006
    The person in panel one is a different trainer than the one in panel 2, that's why the hats are different.

    The text, grammar, art, AND ability to figure out what's going on are all improving. Keep it up.
  • edited December 2006
    Ack! I can't see his comic...
  • edited December 2006
    Night Lord wrote: »
    Aside from the main problem, which we have covered already, a few things:

    Why does his hat change colour?
    You need something to indicate progression of time between panel 1 and 2, e.g. an extra panel showing him walking to the lab, or a box saying "Some time later" in the top of the panel.

    Speech bubbles are getting better though.
    they are 2 different people
    and it took 4 hours to get done
  • edited October 2007
    evaline.png she is something I made from scratch, eric.png he is aslo something from scratch.
    allen.png the re-done main character for my comic. Guisseppi.pngand Guisseppi, his brother
  • edited October 2007
    Giuseppe is an awesome name. (Sorry for the different spelling, that's what Firefox told me to write)
  • edited October 2007
    Do some larger sratch sprites. I dares ya.

    Though I can't sprite to save my life....cept for revamps, splices, and the ones where you modify a sprite to make a different character.
  • edited October 2007
    well I'm not that far yet. I have to learn how to make the characters's heads better.
  • edited February 2008
    http://www.drunkduck.com/Pokemon_Wolley
    This is the new site for my webcomic.
  • edited February 2008
    Didn't you leave or something?

    Comics are better, but would it kill you to make them bigger?
  • edited April 2008
    I made them bigger now
  • edited April 2008
    Better already, but a few things:

    Those translucent bubbles are hard to read.

    Your syntax is a bit dodgy, So:


    You're =A contraction of You Are.
    Your = Second Person Possessive, used, as the name implies, to denote possession. "Your Coke".

    You should only really start words with capitals if they're a name or at the beginning of a sentence, that doesn't include after a comma.
  • edited April 2009
    Okay thank you.
    Necro-update:
    Guisseppi_sheet_X4_by_kirby144.png New Guisseppi
    Allen_Sprite_Sheet_x4_by_kirby144.pngNew Allen
    Daisy_x4_Sprite_sheet_by_kirby144.png Daisy as Trainer
  • edited April 2009
    You're doing a sprite comic?

    About pokemon?

    Really?

    Really?
  • edited April 2009
    Yes I am but I haven't posted in this thread in a long while.
  • edited April 2009
    You have improved very nicely!
  • edited April 2009
    Thank you very much, and I am planning to use a Kid Radd like setup for comic viewing. I also redid all my old pages as well.