It won't die if he...oh. That would suck for him. But technically, you can revive any thread ever made on the Orange Belt! I could even revive the first ever thread...fwuhuhuhu....(<-- pokemon sound/game/phrase?)
Aside from the main problem, which we have covered already, a few things:
Why does his hat change colour?
You need something to indicate progression of time between panel 1 and 2, e.g. an extra panel showing him walking to the lab, or a box saying "Some time later" in the top of the panel.
Aside from the main problem, which we have covered already, a few things:
Why does his hat change colour?
You need something to indicate progression of time between panel 1 and 2, e.g. an extra panel showing him walking to the lab, or a box saying "Some time later" in the top of the panel.
Speech bubbles are getting better though.
they are 2 different people
and it took 4 hours to get done
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Why does his hat change colour?
You need something to indicate progression of time between panel 1 and 2, e.g. an extra panel showing him walking to the lab, or a box saying "Some time later" in the top of the panel.
Speech bubbles are getting better though.
The text, grammar, art, AND ability to figure out what's going on are all improving. Keep it up.
and it took 4 hours to get done
the re-done main character for my comic. and Guisseppi, his brother
Though I can't sprite to save my life....cept for revamps, splices, and the ones where you modify a sprite to make a different character.
This is the new site for my webcomic.
Comics are better, but would it kill you to make them bigger?
Those translucent bubbles are hard to read.
Your syntax is a bit dodgy, So:
You're =A contraction of You Are.
Your = Second Person Possessive, used, as the name implies, to denote possession. "Your Coke".
You should only really start words with capitals if they're a name or at the beginning of a sentence, that doesn't include after a comma.
Necro-update:
New Guisseppi
New Allen
Daisy as Trainer
About pokemon?
Really?
Really?